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Shobs

Stand and enjoy the dawn with eyes closed. Let the cool breeze of the morn fill you up, envelop and engulf you, open your eyes and the sun is there. Incidentally my name too means the Sun.

posted by anib on October 2, 2016 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

Lol, yes you are right there CC.

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu

LOL, that's cute

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

Wiley John

Thank you Wiley John

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:34 AM | link to this | reply

FSI

Yes, I think it does reveal a hidden fear there.

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

UKUSA

Yes, sir I did. The sun was just hidden by clouds..

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

BCA

Thank you Bill

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

Thank you TAPS, sometimes I think I run out of words.

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Naut

Well Naut, there is telepathy here too LOL

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:10 AM | link to this | reply

UKUSA

Thank you, its beautiful

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:07 AM | link to this | reply

Chuck

Thanks so much

posted by shobana on October 2, 2016 at 5:02 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on October 1, 2016 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

https://youtu.be/v0H1MO-t3YY

 

posted by NocrossJustchristmas on October 1, 2016 at 3:34 AM | link to this | reply

Shobana

I've had similar thoughts lately, though not quite as poetically...

posted by Nautikos on September 30, 2016 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

A little short one, but catchy and makes one think.

posted by TAPS. on September 30, 2016 at 12:18 AM | link to this | reply

shobana

A t least it’s a day anyway love. BC-A, Bill’sR👀st

posted by BC-A on September 29, 2016 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

Now that its well past morning, Did you find out, Shobana?

shalom, shalom!

posted by NocrossJustchristmas on September 29, 2016 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

A very deep poem, I find this to be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 29, 2016 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Shobana

Nicely said love.

posted by WileyJohn on September 29, 2016 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

The dawn....I see it often on my way for a bathroom visit, think to myself not time to get up yet, and go on back to bed!!

posted by Kabu on September 29, 2016 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

You poor thing, you could have wandered as lonely as a cloud. I don't think you would find many daffodils though.

posted by C_C_T on September 29, 2016 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

shobana

Yes, very nice. I often ponder such things, metaphorically or literally. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 29, 2016 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply