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I have a different take on 'revenge', as you say, those who hurt are outnumbered by those who don't. Just when one can take and does not is the finest form of revenge-taking. And that's the way it should be.
posted by
anib
on September 17, 2016 at 10:36 PM
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nice poem with lots of heart felt emotion, sounds like to much baggage to carry around, I prefer to let the Lord fight my battles, He is so much better at it than me, revenge is mine sayeth the Lord, thanks for sharing, may your burdens be light and may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 15, 2016 at 7:42 AM
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Hi, dear am so glad to see you back. Have missed you. Revenge is indeed a fire that burns all but like you said 'life is not to be played around with' Hope things calm down with Time, as they say...
posted by
shamasehar
on September 13, 2016 at 3:27 AM
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Nice poem but sad state. Revenge is always worse in time to come than what one is taking it for now. As Wiley said just move on. Welcome to Bloggit.
posted by
Justi
on September 12, 2016 at 8:51 PM
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Shobana
Sounds like time to take life and move on.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 12, 2016 at 3:33 PM
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c'mon love, take that wonderful courage that you have and give 'im both barrels. or do what I did and just walk out.
posted by
Kabu
on September 12, 2016 at 11:13 AM
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Shobana
This poem brought to my mind the same words that occurred to RP! I hope the future looks brighter...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 12, 2016 at 10:06 AM
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Goodness Shobana, sounds like no fury as a woman scorned. Very good.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 12, 2016 at 7:52 AM
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The poem leaves us with a lot of tension at the end.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 12, 2016 at 5:37 AM
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Re: Oops
Make that 'as they say...'
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 11, 2016 at 8:22 PM
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"Hell hath no fury," as the say... Quite interesting. Look forward to more.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 11, 2016 at 8:21 PM
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