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TAPS
Your words and the photo really touched me...I think I'll just give you a
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posted by
Nautikos
on September 8, 2016 at 10:07 PM
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Re: Ciel
It was a side trip actually. I was meeting my Son & Phil in Boulder for his birthday and this was a side trip a little west from where I was staying in Denver. Couldn't help but start thinking about trips with his dad.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 8, 2016 at 9:45 AM
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Re: RPresta
I think the photo. It's been a long time.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 8, 2016 at 9:41 AM
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So, when you went back, you went with yourself... perhaps renewing an acquaintance that had been set back some by having another partner to focus on. It seems both happy and sad.
posted by
Ciel
on September 8, 2016 at 8:43 AM
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You convey your feelings so well in your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 8, 2016 at 5:35 AM
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TAPS
TAPS, dear, which came first, the photo or the poem, I wonder? Both are beautiful, lyrical, dreamy, haunting, and rich in color and feeling. Such a gentle write. And tender, even though...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 7, 2016 at 10:50 PM
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Beautiful and hauntingly romantic, Taps..
and the picture is lovely too; goes well with the verse..
posted by
Katray2
on September 7, 2016 at 5:47 PM
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It's a lovely little bridge and stream, and lucky that you had the
experience to think back on even when the rest of it didn't work out as planned. Nostalgia sometimes bites.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 7, 2016 at 2:48 PM
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Emotion had to find an outlet, lovely poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 7, 2016 at 10:49 AM
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So lovely the sceen and the thoughts in the poem of a time past.
posted by
Justi
on September 7, 2016 at 10:10 AM
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