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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: anibanerjee
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 4, 2016 at 12:55 AM
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The less & less in more @ more. That's the beauty. 
posted by
anib
on July 1, 2016 at 9:12 PM
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You are welcome.
the more one looks, the more one sees
the more one sees, the less one knows
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 30, 2016 at 9:08 PM
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What wonderful questions! As a matter of fact I hardly explored the poem that way. It was as if I was abandoned. Thank you so much that you have the eye to see my entries with such in depth observations. I remain indebted, indeed. 
posted by
anib
on June 30, 2016 at 6:35 PM
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Hmm... You see, he is possibly disloyal (but to whom), or is she also disloyal, she is sleeping, he is leaving... I think if this is the case, or even if she was leaving, it could go many ways. She wakes to find him gone; that would hurt her. He leaves for another, that would hurt her, and possibly he hurts for leaving her. So in that scenario, who is hurting more? Is he leaving because he wants no more to do with her? Will she be glad he's gone? His pain upon leaving, if pain it is, leaves me with more questions, which is the sign is a very good write! LOL.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 30, 2016 at 12:30 AM
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Re: Presta
Now, I am merrily confused. Can you tell? 
posted by
anib
on June 29, 2016 at 9:35 PM
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Re: Kabu
'Tis time for him to go, but Aww, I don't want to, still. 
L
posted by
anib
on June 29, 2016 at 9:33 PM
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Very nicely told. I wonder who shall feel worse, him or her; or better, him or her?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 29, 2016 at 7:38 PM
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A stolen night of passion...yes well she is very satisfied with all her frustrations taken care of. of course she is sleeping deeply peacefully and having done what they both wanted, 'tis time for him to go. Loving it.
posted by
Kabu
on June 29, 2016 at 9:26 AM
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