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Re: onynix

Thank you onynix, I appreciate your kind words. I saw your lovely poem and am glad you decided to post it so others may read what you wrote. Hope your mother liked(s) it, if she is still with us. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 9, 2016 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Unbelievably Beautiful

Incredibly worded and a very lovely sentiment, I did one called "Mother" on mothers day some years ago you made me think about placing it here for others to read.

posted by onynix on June 8, 2016 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: teddypoet52

What a nice thing to say! Thank you so much. I appreciate it! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 6, 2016 at 11:02 PM | link to this | reply

Re: anibanerjee

Thank you ever so much! An interesting word choice. In retrospect I see more her more clearly. Rare is the person who focuses on inner beauty while not being totally cognizant of their own physical beauty. She had the innate ability to parent (along with my father) each of her children as that child's needs required.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 6, 2016 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta
  • This is an exquisite ode to your mom. The word felicity matches so well with the sentimentality of a 'doting' daughter. There is that immediacy of attraction in the first lines where she is unaware of all the beauty that she embodies. 

posted by anib on June 6, 2016 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

Beyond fine, my friend...so nice.

posted by teddypoet52 on June 6, 2016 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: kasperhoe

Thank you. Yes, better late than never. I saw you did the same. Yours was very sweet.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 5, 2016 at 12:46 PM | link to this | reply

It was wonderful

Well, can't find better ways of saying it.

And I can see that I wasn't the only one (thank God) to share a delayed poem from Mother's Day. But as the geniouses might say:

Better late than never. 

posted by kasperhoe on June 5, 2016 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you again, Kabu. I am glad you and everyone who commented, like it. A dear lady she was, who suffered much, bedridden for years with a mind completely cogent, a prisoner of her body, at the end of her life. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Thank you, TAPS. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thank you. She was a lovely lady, and suffered much with illness at her end. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Thank you, Wiley, and enjoy being with Erin. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

This is absolutely beautiful.  I have similar memories of my mother and this brought them all back to me.

posted by TAPS. on June 4, 2016 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

RP

A great tribute to your Mom, who was obviously a lovely lady...

posted by Nautikos on June 4, 2016 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

A wonderful tribute to your mum and I have my oldest daughter Erin

posted by WileyJohn on June 4, 2016 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

posted by Kabu on June 4, 2016 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you, friend. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2016 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

Oh darling. dear friend one of the loveliest tributes I have ever read. we all love our Mothers yours reads very special ...well but she did birth and raise you who also are very special.

posted by Kabu on June 4, 2016 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem RP a real keeper. That song brings back memories and one can visualize your Momma singing it quite easily.

posted by C_C_T on June 4, 2016 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Your mother lived a modest, wonderful life.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 4, 2016 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply