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🌈It sounds as if it’s the state of communion Naut. BC-A, Bill’s R👀st

posted by BC-A on June 2, 2016 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

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From the pleasures of fresh green grass brushing my bare feet.....to a very desolate and sad image.....it's great (as your haiku always are), but....I wish I had read at the time written and not one after the other...I was enjoying the taste of strawberries and cream, and now I am breathing dust....

posted by Krisles on May 31, 2016 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Very good Naut makes me shiver.

posted by C_C_T on May 31, 2016 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

I love it.  Thankfully, they are not all that way....yet.

posted by TAPS. on May 30, 2016 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

You made it easy for us...LOL! 

posted by RPresta on May 30, 2016 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

I can see it well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 30, 2016 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Kabu on May 30, 2016 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply

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