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I love it! Of course, I may be too simplistic in my reaction, not being in the mood to dive deep. But what I love is that this evoked such simple pleasures, such sensual experiences that are forever imprinted, once truly experienced. Things that last....things that we take for granted in this modern world of so many distractions....that is what I took from this....and loved it for.
posted by
Krisles
on May 31, 2016 at 6:18 PM
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Re: And a final thought on this one...
I think I've got it figured out! If so, what a metaphor! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 30, 2016 at 6:52 PM
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Besides the literal, which I chose to interpret, I am reminded of something my mother used to say, "(S)he/they'll come at you like a snake in the grass..." Sooo, I thought of war here in this haiku, also... ?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 29, 2016 at 9:57 AM
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You are not one of those famous reptilians posing as a human are you? Somehow I don't think of wet grass and strawberries together. Perhaps I'm missing out in my brain layers.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 28, 2016 at 11:14 PM
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You and Taps are the Haiku King and Queen. I have strawberries in the fridge. Think I might get myself some for a late breakfast.
posted by
Kabu
on May 28, 2016 at 7:20 AM
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I hope you still enjoy them Naut. Sounds like picnic time. Liked this,
posted by
C_C_T
on May 28, 2016 at 7:09 AM
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What a lovely time of the year.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 28, 2016 at 5:24 AM
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Awwh! Very, very nice. Long ago? More haiku, please.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 27, 2016 at 10:30 PM
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