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There is an air of mystery to her.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 5, 2016 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: black widow

Thank you for your explanation. Yes, for you to tell any more would feel like a betrayal of her in the memories you have, though the stories are probably great! A kind gesture to not exploit her in story or poem; though now we can only guess... Kindness is as kindness does.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 5, 2016 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

black widow

I knew her when I was a child. ,She was no black widow; that was to make a more exciting poem. She was beautiful; blond upsweep, skin like milk. We viaited every year in Jackasonville, FL. for her to see her daughter--raised by my maternal uncle and my aunt.

I was abou 4 when I met her. She was kind to m e. I leanred the word "escort" many years later. So much to tell, but I have so loving a memory of her that I prefer to keep my recollectons to myself. Sad.

 

joe

posted by LongoGeremia on May 4, 2016 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

Mesmerizing lady, mesmerizing poem.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 4, 2016 at 2:00 PM | link to this | reply

Goodness she was some enchantress Joe, evidently you lived past the morning.

posted by C_C_T on May 4, 2016 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Chilling. A wonderful write for we have a whole story in these few words. Five stars and a hug.

posted by Kabu on May 4, 2016 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply