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Good stuff as always,Kathy...nice photo!

posted by teddypoet52 on May 5, 2016 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

Very well done.

posted by shamasehar on May 5, 2016 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

🎨So, philosophy materializes in the form of lovely lines with superb imagery.  Bill’s R👀st

posted by BC-A on May 5, 2016 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

The form of Tanka is new to me. I like what you've done with it.

posted by Pat_B on May 5, 2016 at 4:22 AM | link to this | reply

Reads quite well to me! Bravo! I have never attempted a tanka; haiku is just about over my head! :) I really like it, honestly. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 4, 2016 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

A really nice effort Kat, symbolism filtering through delicately. 

posted by C_C_T on May 4, 2016 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

well I am no disciplined poet but I think you nailed it here and I of course love the theme. Well done I say my sweet darling.

posted by Kabu on May 4, 2016 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply