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Re: WileyJohn

I agree. The exuberance of these dear ones is enlightening! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 24, 2016 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Oh the joyful feelings of youth enlighten old age with happy feelings.

posted by WileyJohn on March 24, 2016 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you. Mobiles! Hah, when girls that age first get to the mall, they are in a hurry to see all the new "stuff" in the windows, and check out who is there. It's on the way back, when they are bored, that they pull out the phones. Besides, it was enough that these two could walk and check gum! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 24, 2016 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you. An interesting observation. I shall remember that!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 24, 2016 at 6:50 AM | link to this | reply

I like the short lines in your poem. That adds a lot to it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 24, 2016 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

Fret not dear lady I could love you for your . 'Stop it Chumpet.' Sorry RPresta I am having a job to control him. Well I suppose I can't keep deleting what he says. ' We  liked your swinging chicks, but wondered where were the mobiles?

posted by C_C_T on March 24, 2016 at 2:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

Hah ha! Oh, yeah! Like the song says: "Those were the days, my friend; We thought they'd never end..."   

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 24, 2016 at 12:03 AM | link to this | reply

Re: shamasehar

What a refreshing and kind thought! Thank you, and the same to you, and all! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 23, 2016 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

oh the good ole days

posted by Lanetay on March 23, 2016 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply

The passage of time and the changes it brings feature beautifully in the poem.Very nice.Happy Easter.

posted by shamasehar on March 23, 2016 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thank you. That theme does seem to frequently appear! I must do something about that.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 23, 2016 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Another excellent poem on the tempus fugit theme...

posted by Nautikos on March 23, 2016 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thank you

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 23, 2016 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

This poem offers a description of cute. Nice.

posted by BC-A on March 23, 2016 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: KaBU

Ah, Kabu, thank you. I think the same thing. Again, my mom always said, "Looks fade away; you have to be pretty on the inside." (My mom was beautiful, inside and out; as are all moms. Well, mostly all moms. LOL!)

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 23, 2016 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

again I love it. I am invisible these days. I think to myself. Love it, enjoy it, it doesn't last...but what does last is if there is substance below the beautiful extrior.

posted by Kabu on March 23, 2016 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply