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Nautikos

Neato poetry old chap.

posted by WileyJohn on February 16, 2016 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on February 11, 2016 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

I have not been able to get this out of the back of my mind since first reading it....it feels like trying to capture a memory of something that my mind keeps reaching out for,  but just can't quite reach.....  Wailing always brings to mind sheer black veils.....winds howling and figures on dark cliffs, stark against thundering skies and crashing waves on a shoreline in the distance....  But, yes....wailing....  

posted by Krisles on February 8, 2016 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

A haunting image to leave us with.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 8, 2016 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

I might add, nice metaphor, perhaps?

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2016 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

Ahh, lovely! We all wail and bemoan the Dusk of Time! Si? 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2016 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

Symbolic in a way Naut You should do some more.

posted by C_C_T on February 7, 2016 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply