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Shall update again shortly.

posted by EJ_Norris on January 9, 2016 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

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looking forward to more.

posted by Kabu on January 9, 2016 at 1:32 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks Lanetay, stop by any time. It should get more interesting as it goes.

posted by EJ_Norris on January 9, 2016 at 8:20 AM | link to this | reply

hmmmm interesting

posted by Lanetay on January 9, 2016 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply

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Glad to hear it, FormerStudentIntern. The story will be updated regularly. I hope you will continue to enjoy. :)

posted by EJ_Norris on January 9, 2016 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

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Either way, the story can be followed and still make relative sense.

posted by EJ_Norris on January 9, 2016 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

The intensity that of which is felt makes its way to the reader.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 9, 2016 at 5:26 AM | link to this | reply

Very good EJ. Hopefully goblins will go back and read the early versions  first .

posted by C_C_T on January 9, 2016 at 2:11 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks RPresta and welcome to Choice Tales and Verse! 

posted by EJ_Norris on January 8, 2016 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply

"...serious groveling..."  love it!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 8, 2016 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

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Tee-hee, if so I take full, guilt free resposability.   Yeah, I know I'm evil. 

posted by EJ_Norris on January 8, 2016 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

EJ

I hope this doesn't give me nightmares...

posted by Nautikos on January 8, 2016 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks Kabu.  I can be very scary when necisarry. Once I attempted horror, just to see if I could do it. I showed it to a class mate and he said he nearly wet himself. Of course, horror won't be the intent here. 

posted by EJ_Norris on January 8, 2016 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

chilling. Really scary.

posted by Kabu on January 8, 2016 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply