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Indeed I try to avoid that. The elements of the story should be what pulls readers in. This one is turning out to be a bit on the whacky side. But as I said, this is a writing laboratory. :)

posted by EJ_Norris on December 19, 2015 at 4:28 AM | link to this | reply

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All the parts are there Kabu, welcome back :)

posted by EJ_Norris on December 19, 2015 at 4:20 AM | link to this | reply

A good episode, the art is I think to everything interesting to the reader and not drift off as so many do into weary descriptions of prolonged examples of their skill.   

posted by C_C_T on December 19, 2015 at 3:10 AM | link to this | reply

dreams....I dreamed that eventually my long haul flights would be over and now they are. Will catch up reading for sure.

posted by Kabu on December 18, 2015 at 3:42 PM | link to this | reply