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Well I did enjoy reading this the girl is a good character. The only thing a little bit thin, just my opinion was the girl telling the guard to provide more protection. Would she not have had to tell someone with higher authority. I am a lousy speller, but I did pick up a couple, I know American is slightly different to UK. It is no prob to run through Word. -
It seems like a runner.
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C_C_T
on November 26, 2015 at 8:20 AM
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