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posted by teddypoet52 on November 3, 2015 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

We are a society prone to judge. We judge from our own sense of pride, comfort, need and a million other things that make up life for us both comforting and sad but each judge will find enough difference to weave their own story about the ride down these winding streets. Excellent.

posted by Justi on November 2, 2015 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

I love the ending of the poem. It strikes me as sort of haunting.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 2, 2015 at 5:26 AM | link to this | reply

memories tend to follow us everywhere we go

posted by Annicita on November 1, 2015 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Yes Kat it is amazing how different the aspect is . Some love perfection and others just tolerate jumble. I guess one could read this through to soothe one's own connection to the state of things.

posted by C_C_T on November 1, 2015 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Katray2

Fast moving open tramcar in now abondoned old neighborhood

posted by WileyJohn on November 1, 2015 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

You've painted with words similarly to that artist that painted that modern lawn landscape painting love

posted by BC-A on November 1, 2015 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply