Comments on Arrival

Go to Choice Tales and VerseAdd a commentGo to Arrival

Re:

Prepare to have expectations defied :)

posted by EJ_Norris on September 9, 2015 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

I like the way you twist, the emotions. The reader groaning for vengeance, I would make the king promise many favours and make him better in painful stages. Being a good natured person of course.    

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2015 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply