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The whole tale is totally captivating! And Hursy not only looks older than his years - you can also tell this young man will do more with his his life than ride the rails forever...

posted by Nautikos on August 29, 2015 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Great piece of writing . Captivating indeed .

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on August 29, 2015 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

He has eyes that have seen too much for a young man. Four years is a long time for his Mama to wait and wonder.

posted by Kabu on August 29, 2015 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

That was a nice take, would not of been good mixing with hoboes looking like that.  

I really hope he does go back home soon for his Mum's sake.

posted by C_C_T on August 29, 2015 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Nice looking young man; his eyes are soulful

Heart rendering continuation; such good writing!

posted by Katray2 on August 29, 2015 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

The stories they all could tell...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 29, 2015 at 5:06 AM | link to this | reply

I'd call him handsome....

posted by Pat_B on August 29, 2015 at 4:40 AM | link to this | reply