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forget the stories, i see a book of poetry being published.

posted by overtherainbow on July 24, 2015 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Thank you, Kabu.

posted by Kabu on July 21, 2015 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, for visiting BC-A.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, CCT.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, Kabu.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: VT01

Thank you, Krisles.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Vt

Thank you, Naut.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, FSI.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, Chuck.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, Charcoal Heart

And yes, you are right. I guess I always thought--nothing money couldn't buy,

meaning a good editor. There is certainly a semicolon that could be questioned....

Although, I think of poetry writing as much more free to do what you want, compared

to other genres of writing. Thanks again, that is what we are here on Blogit for, to

better our skills and honest comments help that.

posted by Vermont01 on July 20, 2015 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

Good job 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 19, 2015 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

The way you wrote this poem stuck out to me. You did a fantastic job and, as a poet myself, I very much enjoyed reading this work. The imagery was fantastic and, though I did find some punctual mistakes - sorry, I am big on stuff like that - I didn't see much wrong! A great write!

posted by Charcoal_Jewel on July 19, 2015 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

I like the way you went about writing this poem. Excellent.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 19, 2015 at 5:38 AM | link to this | reply

Vt

Well done! As Krisles says - very evocative! Cemeteries are faint echoes of people's lives...

posted by Nautikos on July 18, 2015 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

VT01

If you can find peace and perspective anywhere, I believe it is in a cemetery......I love them, always have.  But, like Kabu, I doubt I'll end up in one....I don't care, what happens to my body once I die is up to my daughter - I've told her I truly don't care, and I don't.  But your poem makes me wonder....wouldn't it be nice to have people enjoying those feelings, people I love or people I might, because they sense some lingering echo or think they do...and it adds something to their lives? I really like this.....very evocative🌺

 

posted by Krisles on July 18, 2015 at 4:00 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent, but don't bury me anywhere. Just shake my ashes free and I will float on the wind 'till I find my home.

posted by Kabu on July 18, 2015 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

The darker side of the new poet, I sometimes do walk the local cemetery V. Just to see who is neglecting who after giving them such adoration on the plaque.  I like this one.

posted by C_C_T on July 18, 2015 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

💮Spoon Syrup Anthology in Vermont. BC-A, Bill’s Roost

posted by BC-A on July 18, 2015 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

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