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My neck is straining, bent back as I look up at your hawk....my eyes squinting against the brilliant blue sky....a small tear is gathering at the ends of my eyes from the brightness of the day....or is it the beauty?
posted by
Krisles
on July 12, 2015 at 3:38 PM
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You were able to put an awful lot in a little bit.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 4, 2015 at 4:19 PM
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If I was a rabbit, I would also be cowering.
Love the haiku. You are definitely haiku professional quality.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 4, 2015 at 9:40 AM
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Nautikos
Wonderful Haiku old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 3, 2015 at 1:30 PM
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You got the rabbit bang on Naut. Very good.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2015 at 12:07 PM
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They are so magnificent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 3, 2015 at 5:33 AM
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nice snapshot of the moment
posted by
Annicita
on July 2, 2015 at 11:43 PM
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Nothing safe when they are on high. Great Haiku.
and they are truly beautiful.
posted by
Kabu
on July 2, 2015 at 12:54 PM
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