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I've seen that...not in person of course, but I love watching PBS TV Nature programs, and I've seen that about lions.  You described it in poetry so well.

posted by TAPS. on June 10, 2015 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Thanks for the advise, always appreciated.

posted by Vermont01 on June 10, 2015 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Purple Purse

Thank you.

posted by Vermont01 on June 10, 2015 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Chuck

Thank you.

posted by Vermont01 on June 10, 2015 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: VT01

Krisles, thank you very much.

posted by Vermont01 on June 10, 2015 at 5:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

They most certainly are and thanks for reading.

posted by Vermont01 on June 10, 2015 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you, I have always been fascinated by them.

posted by Vermont01 on June 10, 2015 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

Pretty cool I think.

posted by Inside_The_Purple_Purse on June 10, 2015 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Getting into the feel of it V. The first difficulty is finding a subject to roll around in your subconscious, sometimes you may not like the poem, but that does not mean that other people will feel the same. Sometimes you will like it and other folk will be polite. There was a man on here who did criticize, but he soon got his comeuppance, a pity if he had only been a little discreet he would have raised the standard. There again it is what you feel that you have achieved is really what matters.   

posted by C_C_T on June 10, 2015 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

Good imagery 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on June 10, 2015 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

They are such magnificent creatures.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 10, 2015 at 6:02 AM | link to this | reply

VT01

Love this one...the rhythm and flow of it fit the cat; and give a visual to match the words...very interesting side that you are showing us.

posted by Krisles on June 10, 2015 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

Image result for lionesseGreat poem and a truly magnificent animal.

 

posted by Kabu on June 9, 2015 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply