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 I thought it was a great read but I now feel guilty to be a man.

posted by Vermont01 on April 16, 2015 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Well that's the nub of the matter. Better to keep expectations low and be pleasantly surprised.

posted by C_C_T on April 16, 2015 at 12:25 AM | link to this | reply

Have Faith in yourself. i travelled all round the World and was never once undone. Put a few men in their place but they understood. Tis the men who are weak.

posted by Kabu on April 15, 2015 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Reading your poem reminds me just how quickly things can change and how fast life moves. It marches on.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 15, 2015 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Krisles

"For men are covetous, jealous, territory seekers….hunters, always seeking to conquer and possess" - yes, but there's also the lure of the mystery, that drives us to explore the Universe, knowing we will never ever fully comprehend it, let alone 'conquer' it...The magnetism of the mystery, and the veil is mystery... 

posted by Nautikos on April 15, 2015 at 5:56 AM | link to this | reply