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I did not know....
posted by
Vermont01
on March 13, 2015 at 6:49 AM
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Haiku no. 56
Such wonderful images in so few words.
posted by
2Philomena
on March 8, 2015 at 5:27 PM
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Nautikos
I never thought about how much the heart does resemble a curled fist....I'll come back to this one many times I'm sure.
posted by
Krisles
on February 28, 2015 at 10:22 AM
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Wow! That is some haiku.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 26, 2015 at 6:11 PM
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Nautikos
A Haiku worthy of a scholar my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 24, 2015 at 9:00 PM
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The heart does work that way.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 23, 2015 at 11:33 AM
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Sometimes secrets will kill your insides. Only you have to find a safe place to put them lest they be used against you.
posted by
Inside_The_Purple_Purse
on February 23, 2015 at 6:25 AM
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Yes quite true Naut, some things we never wish to reveal. As Kabu says hidden talent is surfacing.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 22, 2015 at 11:36 PM
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Sounds like a broken heart. Very intense and so well written. We have real Haiku masters here on Blogit. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on February 22, 2015 at 8:10 PM
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