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You do a wonderful job at conveying emotion.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 7, 2015 at 10:33 AM
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Very nice poem 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 7, 2015 at 4:27 AM
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In the middle of a book CCT and its a true but tragic story. I will not say it makes me feel better. I am sure when I have finally got through it I will feel like I have come through some turbulance. I cannot write this stuff unless I get in the guys head which can be scary at times. I am getting on with it now as one cannot remain in this place for too long.
posted by
spiderfly
on February 7, 2015 at 12:46 AM
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I have noticed you have started to write unhappy poems. If this makes you feel somewhat better, I am all for it. I am not demeaning your work. I quite like the way you are writing.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2015 at 11:34 PM
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you write so beautifully.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2015 at 4:03 PM
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I will try Kabu, Thanks
posted by
spiderfly
on February 6, 2015 at 2:15 PM
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Yes please, paint me a picture of happier times. So much sadness, pain death and sorrow. Paint me that scene with dancing and children, with love and with laughter.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2015 at 2:00 PM
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