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actually your poetry is usually very special...this poem is no exception.
posted by
Kabu
on September 29, 2014 at 5:11 PM
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Good job Bill 
keep on the good work.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 29, 2014 at 2:13 PM
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Prayers, I really like this,
like water flows down falls
in freshness of breath
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 29, 2014 at 1:22 PM
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Poor Mrs Sun tell her we are thinking of her as she is a kind lady and deserves a prayer,
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2014 at 10:07 AM
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I agree with FSI. Good writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 29, 2014 at 10:03 AM
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The imagery jumps out at me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 29, 2014 at 9:12 AM
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