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Kabu

There just might Kabu 

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re:

Hi Shama, thank you for the visit

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

Naut

Yes so right about it being threatened, how unfortunate, thanks Naut

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

FSI

Thank you my friend

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 4:08 AM | link to this | reply

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Well CC, I grew up by the beach, our holidays are by the beach so I am quite attuned to the ways of the beach..I shall try harder until I reach the heights of wonder 

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply

BC

Thanks BC - glad you liked.

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 3:56 AM | link to this | reply

Chuck

I can imagine how it must have looked and thanks for the visit.

posted by shobana on July 16, 2014 at 3:55 AM | link to this | reply

I saw a documentary of a real mermaid that was found off shore. That thing sure looked scary. You need to watch that movie when you have time. It is posted on youtube. I like your version of a mermail a lot better.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 15, 2014 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

A lovely Eden for wonder love.

posted by BC-A on July 15, 2014 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

Well Kabu's mermaid, looks more like an octopussy. 

I like your mystical version better Shobana, you always were a great one for exploring the beach. I suppose mermaids could be quite small riding seahorses when the moon shines, the trouble is I always want to immerse myself into your poems, not quite the famous one yet but keep trying. I think you will do it one day. It has got to appeal to the mood of the time I suppose.    

posted by C_C_T on July 15, 2014 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

I love the feeling of liberating your poem conveys.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 15, 2014 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

Shobana

You're invoking the richness of that world, which is, however, being threatened...

posted by Nautikos on July 14, 2014 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

The seabeds have indeed come alive with this poem.🌹

posted by shamasehar on July 14, 2014 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

we never know do we ? There just might be mermaids down down deep.

posted by Kabu on July 14, 2014 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply