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For someone claiming to have 'loose marbles,' this wasn't bad! I myself have absolutely no interest in even attemtping poetry! It would be like putting a paint brush into a monkey's hands and telling him to paint the hallway. Shit would be all over the place . . .

posted by JimmyA on July 3, 2014 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

JS

Cute!

posted by Nautikos on July 2, 2014 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

You are a better poet than what you give yourself credit for.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 2, 2014 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

darlin' some unkind people think that I lost my marbles some years ago... I like the idea of them rolling around and sparkling in the sun...sure roll them around and follow their path, a story will unfold.

posted by Kabu on July 2, 2014 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply