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RThat’s awesome Naut . BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 15, 2014 at 10:56 AM
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funny how quickly something as cute as a monkey can become so threatening... can't imagine this is you though!! (please explain..!)
posted by
mneme
on April 14, 2014 at 2:51 PM
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Nautikos
You've made a poet of yourself Naut. BC-A, Bil's Roost
posted by
BC-A
on April 14, 2014 at 9:55 AM
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great...more haiku. The more I learn about this poetry form the more I love it. Nothing is wasted. Every word must be analysed for its meaning. I read some old regret or mistake resufacing...happens to us with age, and we are all human and flawed. Yes even Queen Kabu. LOL.
posted by
Kabu
on April 13, 2014 at 11:51 AM
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Nice to see you here Naut. I read you deep and clear./
posted by
C_C_T
on April 13, 2014 at 11:28 AM
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You should write these much more often. It's fun to try to think where you are coming from when you write a haiku. In this case, remember what Mom always said: "Just give 'em what they want. When monkeys get aggressive, it's usually because they think you have something to eat."
posted by
TAPS.
on April 13, 2014 at 6:26 AM
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You do a great job at describing that pain...It is great to see you writing a poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 13, 2014 at 6:25 AM
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