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UtahJay
This longish poem seems to end with a goodbye again, I just said much the same to another poetic blogger, C.C.C. LOL..........
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 14, 2014 at 6:08 AM
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Ooooh, to begin with, I love that picture.
This is very good. I would very much like a book that had this in it.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 13, 2014 at 10:15 PM
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Utah
This is powerful - I need to come back and linger over it...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 13, 2014 at 8:50 PM
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Your poem is rich with metaphors. Each metaphor jumps out at me, further explaining the feelings and the scenes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 13, 2014 at 5:09 PM
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