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oh I wish I had cruise control!

posted by calia14 on February 24, 2014 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

I use cruise control every chance I get

posted by Annicita on February 23, 2014 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

JFM

Thanks a lot!

posted by calia14 on February 18, 2014 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Really liked "Potential.". Words are carefully chosen and placed as to seem publicly discrete..."dis-assembly like nervous tick, ruined beginnings ungraciously a grave yard" seems to for-tell the larger story which the title understates as theme: from the ashes of thought arises the Pheonix. This has to be one of your best, and is a real keeper.

posted by jfm32 on February 17, 2014 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Darn speeding ticket!

posted by calia14 on February 16, 2014 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

That does happen.
I have to watch myself looking at pretty stuff when I'm driving.

posted by TAPS. on February 15, 2014 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

It happened to me too.

posted by UtahJay on February 15, 2014 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

A clever little twist there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 15, 2014 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Pooh They always know how to ruin one's day

posted by Kabu on February 15, 2014 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply