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Utah

A somewhat ominous beginnning and and a whimsical ending - great fun...

posted by Nautikos on February 6, 2014 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

UtahJay

Really charming poem I find my friend.........

posted by WileyJohn on February 6, 2014 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

not a house guest I have in mind

posted by Lanetay on February 6, 2014 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

whimsical and fun...see you can write just for fun and entertainment.

posted by Kabu on February 6, 2014 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

That was quite the ride for the fly.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 6, 2014 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

Haha.  How cute.  How so true to life. 
I was watching Judge Judy trying a case in her small-claims court.  Everything was very tense, and suddenly she picked up a flyswatter from somewhere and whacked a fly, then grinned an evil grin.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2014 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply