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Ooh I'm surprise at you Jay, posting a dirty poem. Excellent!

posted by BC-A on January 29, 2014 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

The way in which you arranged the stanzas adds a lot to the poem...I like the concept of the "personal heaven."

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 29, 2014 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

i intend to be cremated so i can hurry the process. no moulding in the grave for me.

posted by Kabu on January 29, 2014 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

I guess we will all turn to it in time Jay. A reminder indeed.

posted by C_C_T on January 28, 2014 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply