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I would not happen today Jay, well not if it was noticed.  

posted by C_C_T on January 25, 2014 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

Utah

It's all there in its complexity - the fear, the pain, but also the love...Very well done...

posted by Nautikos on January 24, 2014 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

My Father would make me go fetch his stick. I remember the fear of doing that (only when I deserved it of course, which was a lot it seems) much more than I remember the pain of the punishment...I think he always knew that.

posted by UtahJay on January 24, 2014 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply

You describe the pain felt so well in your poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 24, 2014 at 3:25 PM | link to this | reply

imagine hitting a child with one of those. Just not right...a good post

posted by Kabu on January 24, 2014 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply