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The painful intensity shines all along but sometimes that's how harsh the truth is...💔
posted by
shamasehar
on December 18, 2013 at 2:11 AM
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I can just feel the intensity.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 17, 2013 at 6:30 PM
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remorse is not a good thing Jay, it can make one really ill if over done...but so well written as all your poetry is of course.
posted by
Kabu
on December 17, 2013 at 4:37 PM
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This is good but oh so sad, remorse is a festering wound on his heart. Sad very sad.
posted by
Justi
on December 17, 2013 at 1:42 PM
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UtahJay
☃Hi,and yet in a world of new life he’s frozen. Excellent Jay in topic and lines love.BC-ABill’s R☋st
posted by
BC-A
on December 17, 2013 at 12:46 PM
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