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This poem captures the experience of living in and being sensitive to a badly fractured culture, and displays it well, even in its arrangement...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 17, 2013 at 6:09 AM
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I am one of those who lives out of tune and out of time. I loved this poem and the physical arrangement agrees with the written arrangement. You know I love your work and this is certainly no exception. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on December 17, 2013 at 12:34 AM
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sometimes it does seem that we are dancing to another's tune. Cute poem Jay.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 16, 2013 at 11:43 PM
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nothing ever stays the same.
posted by
Kabu
on December 16, 2013 at 5:52 PM
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I like the way in which you arranged the poem...A great job there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 16, 2013 at 5:05 PM
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