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Hi Sinome the princess

It has pathos, poignancy and a sad heart that is so touching! Be well my friend.

posted by anibanerjee on December 23, 2014 at 4:25 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

QThe lines here print nicely love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on May 20, 2014 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

This is so true

I've felt this way before

It has happened many a time

It always hurts

 

Thank you for sharing

posted by versebyJess on January 25, 2014 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

Footprints

Poignant imagery.

posted by 2Philomena on January 4, 2014 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

I like the reverse invocation of the washing out

posted by Straightforward on January 4, 2014 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

Such sweet melancholy is something only you can evoke xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on December 30, 2013 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

The love is always there

and can never be washed away and like the wave it will always return to you again and again reminding you of neverending love.

posted by skye08 on December 23, 2013 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

As Your waves came in...

They reached the shore of my heart,

Washed over my thoughts,

My mind,

My dreams.

And reminded me that love was still possible...

Even for a scared heart like mine.

The scars, they do not fade,

But perhaps they help to keep someone from

ever taking a moment of love for granted again.

Thank you, sweet girl.

posted by ForeverPoet on December 18, 2013 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

lovely...

posted by Annicita on December 1, 2013 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

This poem reminds me of some of my fondest memories, of strolling along a lonely beach, listening to the surf... 

posted by Nautikos on November 28, 2013 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

I just stopped by to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving and to tell you what a wonderful poet you are.

posted by UtahJay on November 28, 2013 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

To roll back time one would have to control the elements. I don't think those footprints are really destroyed or we would not see them as we read your poem.

posted by C_C_T on November 28, 2013 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply

   The beach with the waves rolling in always refreshes me with the continuity ...endless eons of sands and time. somehow it makes me feel that whether I am here or not...before I came, after I am gone...life on earth goes on.

posted by Kabu on November 28, 2013 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

The stories that go behind them...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 28, 2013 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply

This is lovely xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on November 28, 2013 at 2:31 AM | link to this | reply

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