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A story told in a very interesting manner.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 24, 2013 at 9:33 PM
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Thought provoking poem Jay... so true though, that those moments from long ago...that first love we thought was gone...resurfaces again and again when we least expected. A song, a smell a sight... and there it is...the longing..and we miss those lips we barely remembered for such a long time... Beautiful write xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 24, 2013 at 7:46 PM
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another amazing write. Life, full of such mysteries and you bring them slowly and slowly but persistently to my mind to ponder.
posted by
Kabu
on November 24, 2013 at 6:14 PM
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Awesome dude... I really love the depth of remembered love stripped of its lust. 
posted by
Justi
on November 24, 2013 at 5:51 PM
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Great questions to ponder at the end of the poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 24, 2013 at 5:01 PM
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