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Here's To Beauty
A triumph once again, Sweet Friend! Beauty expressed, and, I must say, addictive. This one reminds me of a work by on eof my very favorite poets, William Moody. "A poem is here inside of me,fluttering like a bird,Struggling to uncage itself,wild, and never heard.A song unsung,nor understood,And least of all by me,Of unseen mountain torrents,Of lonely waves at sea,The beat of wings where sea dunes are,The sea gulls' strident cry,The stinging of the ocean wind,that makes the salt spume fly. Come out,come out, and take the air, Your birth is more than I can bear!"

posted by ForeverPoet on November 25, 2013 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

very nice and I dont recall one like this before

posted by Lanetay on November 25, 2013 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

Poetry is like music, the more I read it the more I like it.

posted by UtahJay on November 24, 2013 at 10:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I can understand the difficulty in writing about one's regrets! I have never believed those that tell us 'Regrets I have none' as in that song - I think they're lying to us and to themselves...

posted by Nautikos on November 24, 2013 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

The beginning and the end i thought I know this poem.....so yes you have written something like and obviously something inside you needs to be written ...but then as it is is beautiful dearest friend.

posted by Kabu on November 24, 2013 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

So tough it can be to let go...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 24, 2013 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

Perhaps you be kinder to yourself Simone. We all wish we had done things at a time.

I was thinking of my Mother this morning, sitting vacantly  in a chair and

 health visitor said .'why not give her a bowl of water and some spoons to wash.

I suppose it would have been a good idea, but I was under stress and I said

 she will spill it and make a mess. I suppose one has to be logical, she would not take

 pills and those available were no use, but little things bite at times whatever one does.

posted by C_C_T on November 24, 2013 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

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