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If love could heal ...if love could bring back if love could ...it would...Lovely work dearest.

posted by Kabu on November 22, 2013 at 3:39 PM | link to this | reply

"If" such a word of longing....you used it well in this poem.

posted by TAPS. on November 22, 2013 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

I like how you repeat the title throughout the poem. That adds to the emotion the speaker is feeling.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 22, 2013 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A love poem of longing and passionate tenderness - just beautiful...

posted by Nautikos on November 22, 2013 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Fortunate, Fortunate Man
Whoever he may be, Is the most fortunate man. That an angel would love a man, That she would brush his body with her wings, and lay her sweet self down beside a mere mortal. This is a true miracle!

posted by ForeverPoet on November 22, 2013 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

It is of course sad and beautiful and the inspiration is hopefully soothing.

posted by C_C_T on November 22, 2013 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

One of the best poems I have read in some time, you are a star bright with talent. Soon I must slow my posts here on Blogit that I might have time to build my dream, maybe leave for a while, but I will be reading you and other friends...Be well.

posted by UtahJay on November 21, 2013 at 11:07 PM | link to this | reply

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