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Sinome

Amazing imagery! And it somehow reminds me that war seems to be part of the human condition...

posted by Nautikos on November 21, 2013 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply

Chilling, fantastic imagery. I was picturing clouds and shapes fun and breeze, and then an ominous overcast coming in...

posted by calia14 on November 21, 2013 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

the sky does make a lot of images

posted by Lanetay on November 21, 2013 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

This Is Beauty

Seen in the sky of your heart,

Through your eyes,

That haunt all of us and

tear away my disguise

of adulthood...

Just two children playing on the beach,

looking out on the limitless Ocean of

imagination, friendship and the feeling of no name...

Your phrases of sweet delight are precious, my friend.

posted by ForeverPoet on November 21, 2013 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

I just can't get the meaning in this poem Simone. I don't dislike it, but is so different to what you usually write.  

posted by C_C_T on November 21, 2013 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

It took my soul away as well, the sound in my ears never dies.

posted by UtahJay on November 20, 2013 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

We had the sky up there, all speckled with stars, and we used to lay on our backs and look up at them, and discuss about whether they was made or only just happened. ~Mark Twain

We used to do that too.  We looked at the clouds by day and the stars by night and talked of cabbages and kings and wars and someday my prince will come.  I guess people of all ages have had the sky for their enjoyment.

posted by TAPS. on November 20, 2013 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Surely more can be resolved by talks and with compromise...Oh leave it to us Mothers and Grandmothers or like Nelson Mandella and join people together with a Rugby game...

posted by Kabu on November 20, 2013 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

A lot of innocence has been sadly lost...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 20, 2013 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

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