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Sinome

Regrets - yes we all have those, don't we? And you have expressed that well...

posted by Nautikos on November 20, 2013 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Memories are made of this love

posted by BC-A on November 20, 2013 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

I have lied to myself a time or two...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 20, 2013 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

To A Sweet Regreter

I felt your regrets as if they were my own,

Each lonely tear that is not so alone now

that I am here to observe your grief

(that is written as snow that is over-laid with gold).

Beauty, my sweet friend, follows you as shadow,

As high as I know you will fly,

It will always be your reflection on the ground.

 

posted by ForeverPoet on November 20, 2013 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

who ever knows the answer to all of those questions

posted by Lanetay on November 20, 2013 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

Great!  I really like it.  Makes me wish I could make myself try to write a poem again.

posted by TAPS. on November 20, 2013 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

I guess if there were words of comfort, we would never feel sad.

posted by C_C_T on November 19, 2013 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply