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nks  thanks   wish I knew how to write music

posted by poetjpb on February 14, 2004 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

betrayal, forgiveness, resentment sounds like a love song to me

posted by meggs53 on February 14, 2004 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

I'll check it out
And I like minimalist! Those people that go on and on and on and on and snooze... Gad!

posted by Oceandancer on January 9, 2004 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

THANK YOU

THANKS!  short poems I find are the most challenging to write.  My poetry teacher said i was a

"minimalist."  I like the sound of that.  I am posting one page at a time, one page each day from my poetry

book, Raucous Miracle.  Check it out.  "poetry" column.  I usually post around 5:00 ish CA time.

poetjpb

posted by poetjpb on January 8, 2004 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

See!
You write GOOD poetry. Look at all that is encapsulated in that one line. Admirable.

posted by Oceandancer on January 8, 2004 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply