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Re: MsJudy, he's a fascinating fellow and made ac danger into an
opppotunity.
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2902
on September 5, 2013 at 4:07 AM
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Re: I like the part about its being "a Greek thing."
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2013 at 4:05 AM
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Re: Thank you, Jay. I always wondered how he got the crew to go along with
his scheme. I'm still not sure.
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2902
on September 5, 2013 at 4:04 AM
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Re: Thanks, FSI. For the opening I concentrated on the results
of their singing, not the singing itself. It was easier and sort of raised the ante.
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2902
on September 5, 2013 at 4:02 AM
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2902
on September 5, 2013 at 3:58 AM
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Re: Oh, I bet you answered a couple, CC.
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2902
on September 5, 2013 at 3:58 AM
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Re: I like the last three words - time had to be running out!
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2013 at 3:56 AM
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Very nice read Bob, I enjoyed it!
posted by
MsJudy
on September 4, 2013 at 6:08 PM
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thanks...i don't think i read that one b4!
posted by
Annicita
on September 4, 2013 at 4:17 PM
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Well done Bob and a great read.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 4, 2013 at 1:07 PM
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The images flow well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 4, 2013 at 10:25 AM
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Sweet Bob . I don't think I would fancy honeycomb plugged in my ears but then I have resisted those siren calls for a long time .Joking aside you made a good job of this.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2013 at 10:04 AM
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Especially punching up the ending, huh? Gave me an early morning giggle! Really enjoy the way you're telling this story.
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adnohr
on September 4, 2013 at 4:23 AM
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