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A song for you and George:

posted by TAPS. on September 4, 2013 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

Justi

Ö That’s the Beginning and the End love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on September 4, 2013 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

I wonder, did we chose our lives, or did I make this mess myself, oh I have known the Antagonist, the Great Liar and we walked hand in hand for so long, like so many still do, unaware that he is there...So much to do to find the light for those who cannot see.

posted by UtahJay on September 4, 2013 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

c.c.

Dear one I don't plan on it but he is always around to catch us in a jam of some sort. You take care. Thanks for reading me.

posted by Justi on September 4, 2013 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

Clever poem Justi,I just hope you do not ever meet the guy at the end, 

posted by C_C_T on September 4, 2013 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

I dont think I want to know how my story will end and when

posted by Lanetay on September 4, 2013 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed your peom very, very much it was lovely

posted by MsJudy on September 3, 2013 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

A very powerful poem, I find this to be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 3, 2013 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

this looks really good lovey wonder if you could move it to the center cos I am having trouble reading it and I want to.....   

posted by Kabu on September 3, 2013 at 4:02 PM | link to this | reply