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Very Beautiful. It reminds me of ...

The Haunting                                            Copyright Oct.9, 2013

 

You will perhaps never know these thoughs,

Driven through me with the nails of years,

Hidden from you within secret tears,

And the strong winds behind the sails of a restless heart.

One who is a reminisent critic of times' art,

A lover of the strange,

A dealer in oddities,

All things that remind me of myself.

 

I do not write to your mind now,

But to your heart instead,

Knowing that the heart-voice is louder in the head,

Than any scream from any mind could ever be.

Knowing that these whispers from me,

Will haunt you with these echoes of longing

Love that will not die until I am gone...

 

                                                        -ForeverPoet

 

                                                        -May your day be as beautiful as your verse.

posted by ForeverPoet on October 9, 2013 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

|Now you take in it all love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on September 18, 2013 at 1:52 PM | link to this | reply

that is gorgeous and filled with that sweet melancholy that you do so well

posted by lionreign on September 18, 2013 at 3:36 AM | link to this | reply

C'est la vie

Beautiful imagery.

posted by 2Philomena on September 7, 2013 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

just thinking of you dear one.. hugs and hope sent your way..

posted by Blue_feathers on September 3, 2013 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

you are such a special person...Just love you dear and of course your work.

posted by Kabu on August 31, 2013 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

Things have a way of changing, but your poetry is always beautiful.

posted by UtahJay on August 31, 2013 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Dr_JPT on August 30, 2013 at 7:46 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

No one expresses the essence of nostalgia as well as you...

posted by Nautikos on August 30, 2013 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

I remember your statue Simone. Sweet poem. 

posted by C_C_T on August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM | link to this | reply

life never remains the same as we look back to our youth

posted by Lanetay on August 29, 2013 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Perhaps, but I'll bet that statue is still there . . .

posted by JimmyA on August 29, 2013 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

A lot of symoblism behind the wind there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 29, 2013 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

nothing wrong with that...he can do nothing to tarnish that love either...nice sentimental poem sinome

posted by Annicita on August 29, 2013 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

such a lovely soul you have

blessings to you..

posted by Blue_feathers on August 29, 2013 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, hope, happy and sad, life in a basket and we dance to the music as best we can.

posted by UtahJay on August 29, 2013 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Sinome,

You are a lovely romantic soul. That is the core of one who is a good friend, good girlfriend, good wife, good mother and the list goes on and on. You have heart lots and lots of heart. Be very sure not to leave yourself out when you are passing out so much wonderful love and care. I love you, prayers are continuing.

posted by Justi on August 28, 2013 at 11:46 PM | link to this | reply

The thing is, 'la vie' gives us both sad and happy at different times. It is challenging, but hope is an important part. Lovely poem, Simone.

posted by adnohr on August 28, 2013 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply