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Re: UtahJay

Thank you my friend...

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 28, 2013 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply

A wonderful poem my friend.

posted by UtahJay on August 27, 2013 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: MsJudy

Thank you very much..

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 27, 2013 at 2:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you very much..

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 27, 2013 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lustorlove

I know!

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 27, 2013 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Well... I was trying my best ..

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 27, 2013 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I get the feeling that you were a little boxed-in by your search for

Was I you think?

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 27, 2013 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

Simply loved your poem!

posted by MsJudy on August 26, 2013 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

wonderful poem my friend.

posted by Kabu on August 26, 2013 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

What an incredible poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 26, 2013 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

quit a rhyming journey

posted by Lanetay on August 26, 2013 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

i agree with 2902...poetry no longer has to rhyme...but i liked it...try a free form...it's very liberating

posted by Annicita on August 26, 2013 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

I get the feeling that you were a little boxed-in by your search for

so many rhymes.

posted by 2902 on August 26, 2013 at 2:53 AM | link to this | reply