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adnohr...

Thanks very much..I'm really glad to hear the atmosphere comes across well...

posted by Rumor on August 14, 2013 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

Really good creation of atmosphere! I shivered when reading this last post (after catching up on the others), as much from the chill of the cold air as the horror that may be out there. Great story!!

posted by adnohr on August 13, 2013 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

CCT...yes, I thought of that...;)

Henry and I flipped a coin to see who would walk alone, and of course, I lost...writing in the first person really does add a bit to the suspense. - me in disguise..

posted by Rumor on August 13, 2013 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS...nope, no copious bags at this point....

Everyone's favorite firearm would be about it for anybody to carry....

posted by Rumor on August 13, 2013 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply

Pat..more will follow soon..

Liz is on vacation this week, so my posting has been more sporadic than I expected....

posted by Rumor on August 13, 2013 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu..its interesting how writing this in the first person..

does add a bit extra to the creepiness....

posted by Rumor on August 13, 2013 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

FSI...yes, perfect weather for him....

We're inching our way towards the story's climax....

posted by Rumor on August 13, 2013 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

You are brave walking alone I would have wanted something a bit more powerful than a revolver,probably a flame gun already glowing.

posted by C_C_T on August 13, 2013 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

I'm certain that I would not take my "copious bag" and go out at night if I thought a madman might be on the prow-ow-owl.

posted by TAPS. on August 13, 2013 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

Ewww, creepy. More, please.

posted by Pat_B on August 12, 2013 at 1:03 PM | link to this | reply

eery with fog and freezing rain...take care my friend for danger lurks beyond the street lights.

posted by Kabu on August 12, 2013 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

It is perfect weather for the mad man.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 12, 2013 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply