Go to Roan Writes Poetry...
- Add a comment
- Go to (No subject)
wow,
i've just been reading through your poetry and this one just jumped out at me! i had to read it a couple of times, but i love the imagery and i love the emotion that is detailed in this poem!
posted by
littlemspickles
on February 25, 2004 at 4:29 PM
| link to this | reply
Thank you...
Thank you both for your very kind words...you encourage my heart to see the world from a poetic point of view as I did in years past. You are helping me get that vision back. Thank you...
Roan
posted by
Roan
on January 11, 2004 at 5:34 PM
| link to this | reply
a tremblingly fine piece that lilts in all the right places
teasing out the "ah what I'd do if I were in your shoes" sentiments and pulling
at the "caress me as I melt into your languid embrace" strings of our heart....
YOU have a much nicer way with words than I--I am just practising! good work!
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on January 3, 2004 at 9:57 PM
| link to this | reply
Ah yes.
The things we do for love. Very nice poem. :)
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on January 3, 2004 at 9:47 PM
| link to this | reply