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Sinome

HBoth bright (first half) and melancholic (second half). Excellent poem love. BC-A, Bill’s R®stA

posted by BC-A on August 1, 2013 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

You write so beautifully that I believe God will make you one of his special angles, those who paint the sunsets in the sky.

posted by UtahJay on August 1, 2013 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful flow to this, but I picture you rather as a gentle ghost, floating through the house, smiling, with an aura of joy for having been reunited with that elusive love...

posted by adnohr on August 1, 2013 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

I like the wishes..

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 1, 2013 at 1:10 AM | link to this | reply

If you could wish

for 1 thing to give someone, what would it be ? Something they could cherish alive, or cherish through eternity? 

posted by Raysongs on July 31, 2013 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

I like the flow of the imagery.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 31, 2013 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

I have a new dimension for enjoying sunsets and sunrises and Oh I do love an old cemetary too. Friendly Ghost, maybe we will dance together.

posted by Kabu on July 31, 2013 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

what a beautiful set of wishes ... charming dear 

posted by Blue_feathers on July 31, 2013 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply