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such bittersweet lines.. or am I over thinking?? 
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 31, 2013 at 11:55 AM
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soft velvet of night warm glow from the moon twinkle little star to show me the way while water lasps at my feet.
posted by
Kabu
on July 31, 2013 at 11:17 AM
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A beautiful night can sooth so much.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 31, 2013 at 10:53 AM
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Like the song 'Why does the Sun keep on Shining'. Remember it? But don't be fooled - the Universe does share with you. You are NOT alone.
posted by
adnohr
on July 31, 2013 at 6:47 AM
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You are a lyrically lyric poet.
posted by
2902
on July 31, 2013 at 6:21 AM
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Sometimes it is the beauty of the moment that gets us.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 30, 2013 at 11:33 PM
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Sinome
Thoughtful and complex...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 30, 2013 at 9:36 PM
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This is great writing. I can feel it.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 30, 2013 at 9:13 PM
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Hi Marta
The pathos of the reality is touching indeed. And the stream of thought just flows. Beautiful, my princess xoxoxo!
posted by
anib
on July 30, 2013 at 9:02 PM
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Wonderful poem.. I think I have been in such situation.
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on July 30, 2013 at 7:58 PM
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