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well done and such a beautiful goodbye ...so elegantly done. I am clapping your talent...again.

posted by Kabu on July 19, 2013 at 3:34 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

MPerhaps we go between blocks to love like we miss the breeze on a city street of tall buildings love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on July 19, 2013 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Well written! And I'm glad he got the message and that she did find love in the end...

posted by Nautikos on July 19, 2013 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Reading this and the explanation reminds me that things work out.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 19, 2013 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

Things always have a way of working out for the best, or at least what we think is the best, and with a poem like this, so full of feeling, how could he have been the right man for her, not braving heaven and hell to turn things around.

posted by UtahJay on July 19, 2013 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

So wonderful... I lived the moments...

posted by Saif_AlKindi on July 19, 2013 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply